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Post by blake on Aug 13, 2012 15:43:38 GMT -8
prompt: we were drinking champagne and losing our shirts.
we lost our shirts that night don't you remember? you mouth was sweet even as you smoked o's and got me to pop x in our own little game of tic-tac-toe you told me to relax, no one would know porcelain teeth and glass hookahs found their way to my lips your talk was saccharine mine was coquettish drowned with champagne we reminisced the night i was your first, you said ask him how i taste did it taste like revenge? milky skin cool to the touch we were lovers eons ago now were just kids who lost their shirts.
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Post by THE TRUE JIN on Aug 15, 2012 7:26:57 GMT -8
updated + 20 points. Please update your points tracker.
Something different and something new. I like the end contrast of kids compared to the rest of the poem.
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