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Post by lunar on Jan 20, 2015 11:04:40 GMT -8
Hey everyone! Lunar here! So, I am going to get straight to the point, and not beat around the bush. This interest check is for a romance site I am working on inspired by an otome game called Queen of Darkness 2: The Second Reproduction. This game can be downloaded for the computer, and was originally released back in 2012. What I need is some critique on the plot I have come up with based off the game's setting and storyline, and I would love to know if anyone is interested in joining once it is finished. So, here's the plot!! Long ago, a conflict between Humans and Demons erupted into an outright war, ending many innocent lives of both races. However, it was thanks to the efforts of a young woman named Christina that ended the war, and brought peace across the kingdoms of Almenan and Deathryde. Humans and Demons had finally begun to see eye to eye, thus forming an unbreakable alliance. An age of endless peace was within reach, until that peace shattered in an instant. A group of individuals, who held a deep hatred for Demons, banded together to bring them to extinction. War seemed inevitable, and now conflict between both races started once again. However, many still believe that Demons and Humans could coexist with one another, so another faction formed, hoping to bring light to those trapped in darkness. Which path will you choose? Can love between both races end another war, or will darkness consume the land? If anything needs changing or slight tweaking, don't hesitate to let me know! Thank you so much for your time!
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Post by lunar on Jan 23, 2015 15:38:30 GMT -8
Still looking for some feedback!
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Post by lunar on Jan 27, 2015 19:02:38 GMT -8
Please?? Anyone?? I'm willing to answer questions if you guys have anything to ask!
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Post by lunar on Jan 30, 2015 12:02:51 GMT -8
Bump
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Post by lunar on Feb 9, 2015 17:54:02 GMT -8
Bump
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Post by lunar on Feb 10, 2015 22:39:07 GMT -8
Heya! So, I've decided to completely redo the entire site setting and plot. -.- It will no longer be based off Queen of Darkness 2, as much as it pains me to say it. So instead I've decide to make Take Me As I Am into a modern day romance/fantasy roleplay. Which means that there will be moe races besides Humans and Demons. But I'm going to need your input/help on creating or thinking of the races. I also need help redoing my plot, so, if anyone is interested in giving me a hand, I'd be most grateful!
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gloria luciferis in excelsis
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Post by THE LEVIATHAN on Feb 11, 2015 9:20:18 GMT -8
I am skinning this for Lunar, but I'm no lore creator. If anyone with any experience or any ideas could help her out, that'd be appreciated. :3c
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Post by lunar on Feb 11, 2015 23:35:12 GMT -8
Hey everyone! Here's a really long update regarding the site! I had some help from a friend of mine, and he helped me think of an amazing idea for how the site may function and work. This is a lot of info to take in, so be prepared! Let's get this started, shall we? FACTIONS- There will be two main factions that everyone has the option to join. We don't have a name for them just yet, so for now, let's call them the Good and Evil factions. Each faction has a different view of things, basically different beliefs and values. And because of this, the two factions have declared war on each other, and are trying to recruit other races to join their cause. You have a list of races to select from and you are free to decide which faction your character is more suited for.
- There is also of course, the Neutral faction, which are individuals who merely want to live their lives in peace without getting involved in the war. However, the Neutral party can be easily persuaded, which we will get to later on. So, if you prefer to live your life without conflict, this is the faction for you.
- The two main factions follow a simple golden rule: they must vow to never harm a Human. This is because Humans are easily manipulated, and may prove to be an advantage to either faction.
RACES- Humans are the most common species found in the world, and are very exploitable. They are easily corrupted/seduced, as well as easily persuaded. They have a very short life span, and yet they can achieve great things during the short time they have to live.
- Demons are able to live up to at least a few centuries, making them the most long lived race in the world. The only ones equal to their life span are the Angels. Demons have the ability to use magic, such as control the power of the elements, for example. They can appear frightening and intimidating, But can appear very beautiful to seduce their victims. However, a Demon has a chance of becoming purified, thus losing their demonic powers.
- Angels are beings sent from Heaven, or so they say. They have the ability to fly and heal, as well as being able to purify Demons. However, an Angel can become fallen if they do certain actions, though those actions have yet to be known and/or thought of.
- Vampires are creatures that consume blood, and are ghostly pale. Despite being nocturnal, they are able to walk in sunlight without bursting into flame. However, if out in the sun for too long, they become physically weak, and their thirst for blood becomes stronger. They are able to run at remarkable speeds, fast enough to the point that they are invisible to the eye. If a vampire were to sink their fangs into someone's flesh, such as their neck, their fangs release a powerful venom that flows into the victim's bloodstream, transforming them into a vampire.
- Werewolves are children of the moon, having the ability to transform into a wolf at will. They have enhanced senses and have high body temperatures, as well as being able to read each other's minds while in their wolf form. They follow their instincts at all times, and are excellent hunters. However, if one were to mate with a werewolf, the two are bound together by a werewolf's ability to imprint on their selected mate. Once that happens, you are bound together for life.
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